Here is Part 1 of my new Halloween story, The Gray House Ghost...
The Gray House
Ghost
By Catherine Mesick
“And so I’m going
to go check out the house.”
Rachel
looked up from her phone. She hadn’t really been listening to her brother, but
he had her attention now.
“You’re
going to what?”
“I’m
going to check out the house,” Justin repeated. “I’ll set up an investigation
there over Halloween. I’ll do my first show about it.”
“I
don’t think you should go,” Rachel said.
“Why
not?”
Rachel
looked at her brother—sixteen years old and he thought he knew everything.
“I
think it’s too dangerous,” Rachel said.
“How
could it possibly be dangerous?” Justin asked. “I thought you didn’t believe in
any of that stuff.”
“I
don’t,” Rachel said. “But the place is supposed to be haunted, and every weirdo
in town will be over there that night. Besides, the building’s really old, and
it may not be structurally sound.”
Justin
rubbed his chin ruefully. “You make a good point about the place maybe being
mobbed.”
“So
you’re not going?”
Justin
said nothing and simply looked gloomy.
“I
know you want to get your web series started,” Rachel said. “But I don’t think
that Halloween at the Gray House is the time or the place to do it.”
Justin
didn’t reply to that either, and Rachel was pleased with herself for having
talked her little brother out of an unwise enterprise.
So
when she came home a week or so later on Halloween night to an empty house, she
wasn’t unduly worried.
It
was seven o’clock. Rachel had gone to school that day and then to the
library—it was a Wednesday. Her parents, she knew, were meeting with friends
then going to a Halloween party. Her brother had been in the habit of stopping
by a friend’s house lately, but he wasn’t usually out any later than six.
Rachel
figured Justin and his friend had simply gotten more caught up in their
ghost-hunting talk than usual.
She
looked for what her mom had left her in the fridge for dinner, and after
microwaving some lasagna, she sat down on the couch with her plate and a big bowl
of candy to wait for trick-or-treaters.
Soon
a steady stream of children in costumes came by the house, and Rachel frowned
when she looked up and realized it was eight o’clock. Justin still wasn’t home.
Then another half hour went by, followed by another. By nine thirty, Rachel was
genuinely worried. She left the bowl of candy outside for the later
trick-or-treaters to empty and then hurried up to her brother’s room.
Any
half-hearted hope she might have had that Justin had been hiding in his room
the whole time was dashed when she opened the door to find a dark room with the
curtains still open.
The
familiar outline of Justin’s things stood out starkly in the artificial light from
the street—it was clear that the room had been empty for some time.
Rachel
went to her brother’s desk and switched on the light. The spare white surface
of the desk was empty of paper, and the whiteboard that hung on the wall above
it was suspiciously free of any of Justin’s usual notes in blue and green.
Rachel quickly got out her phone and dialed Justin’s friend Mike.
“Hey,
Rachel.” Mike answered right away. He was a year older than Justin and was
actually a senior like Rachel.
“Hey,
Mike,” Rachel said.
“What’s
up?”
“I
was just wondering if Justin’s still with you?”
“Justin?”
Mike sounded surprised. “He didn’t come over today. He said he had to go
straight home after school—he had some stuff to do.”
“Oh,”
Rachel said.
“Is
everything okay?”
“Yeah,”
Rachel said. “Everything is good. Just thought I’d check. I know where Justin
is now. Thanks.”
Rachel
shut off the call abruptly.
She
did indeed know where Justin was—her stubborn brother had gone over to the Gray
House.
Rachel
thought briefly of calling her parents to let them know where she was going,
but she quickly nixed the idea. She didn’t know what her parents would think
about it, and she didn’t want to get her brother in trouble.
Instead,
she grabbed her car keys and ran out the door.
The
trip over to the Gray House took about twenty minutes, and Rachel wondered if
Justin had walked all that way or if someone had driven him over. The house sat
on a lonely stretch of road and was surrounded on both sides by fields. There
were no other houses or businesses nearby, and the local buses didn’t operate
this far outside of town.
Rachel
pulled the car up the long, dusty drive that led to the Gray House and parked
in front of it. She was relieved to see that there were no other cars around,
and she had to admit to herself that she was wrong about the locals flocking
there on Halloween night. They had more common sense than she’d given them
credit for.
Rachel
got out of the car and stood looking up at the house. It had a wide porch in
front, and the building itself was a bit ramshackle. The original house had
been built in colonial times, and later generations had added on bits and
pieces, the largest of which was an entire wing that had been added during the
Civil War—it had nearly doubled the size of the house. The Gray House was named
not for any of its owners—but rather for the color of the house itself. The
house had actually been built by a once-prominent family named Green, and
members of the Green family had lived in it until about the 1880s. Rachel
remembered vaguely that the family had moved out suddenly without ever selling
the property after some sort of tragedy. The house had been left to fall into
ruin and disrepair, and its sad, abandoned appearance combined with old rumors
about the Green family had conspired to create a belief amongst the locals that
the Gray House was haunted.
But
haunted or not, the house was undoubtedly old, and Rachel eyed the porch with
some wariness.
A
light suddenly turned on in the attic, and Rachel sighed. That was probably her
brother adjusting his ghost-hunting equipment. She switched on the flashlight
she’d taken from the glove compartment and stepped up to the porch.
The
span of floorboards between the steps and the door suddenly looked very wide
and treacherous.
Rachel
started forward gingerly, and she managed to make it all the way to the door
without incident. The floorboards didn’t break, and they didn’t even creak.
Rachel
reached out for the old-fashioned handle, and she wasn’t surprised when it
turned easily, and the door swung open. She knew Justin had gotten inside, and
since the house was abandoned, there was really no reason to keep it locked.
Rachel
shone her light on the big, empty front room, and she walked slowly and
carefully through several more rooms. Though the house was completely devoid of
furniture, it wasn’t very dusty, and there weren’t even any cobwebs. The floors
and walls were intact, and there were even a few decent-looking chandeliers
hanging from the ceiling in a few rooms. It almost looked as if someone had
been taking care of the place.
“Maybe
they knew how to build them back then,” Rachel whispered to herself.
She
returned to the front room, which had a massive staircase, and after examining
it with her flashlight, she decided it looked safe enough to use.
She
began to climb it.
Rachel
had briefly considered calling out her brother’s name, but she knew she was too
far below the attic for him to be able to hear her, and something about the
empty, well-preserved house seemed to compel her to silence.
She
had just reached the first landing and was about to start on the next set of
stairs when she thought she heard the front door open and close below her. Once
again, she very nearly called out her brother’s name, but she soon thought
better of it—it was probably the locals finally showing up for some Halloween
troublemaking.
Rachel
turned off the flashlight. Maybe they’d just dare each other to walk around a
little and then go.
She
continued on her way up the stairs, stepping carefully and quietly in the dark.
But
she soon heard heavy footsteps on the staircase below her, and a moment later
she saw a flashlight spotting the way ahead.
Rachel
flattened herself against the wall and hoped that the intruder wouldn’t see
her. But the heavy footsteps came even closer, and soon the flashlight shone
full on Rachel’s face.
*You can read Part 2 here.*
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